Here is the feedback and grades from my peers of ENC3310:

TRACY: You guys defintely provided a lot of information about this game. I enjoyed reading both sides of the arguement because it gave the paper a different voice than the others. I would have liked to see a little bit more organization throughout the piece, even though it's hard when it comes together from both ends. Overall I did learn from reading this and that is always important! I would give this an A.

Michele-I enjoyed reading the sort of second to final piece. Not having to do with the grade, but breaking it up on your page into paragraphs would make it easier to read. I believe that this paper has progressed a lot from your original draft, the one that I read in class. It is somewhat clearer, but I think there was a problem uploading the FINAL final draft so I'll hold out until tomorrow. I understand, I also am a terrible procrastinator. More to come now that it's posted :P -->Okay, here's the real deal! I love how it's cut up now so that the reader can tell who they're reading. It's much easier to understand and you simplified the lingo a lot. It's come a loooooong way from the original and I think that it now describes WOW very well. You guys covered everything that I, as a fellow player, know and love about WOW, but still in a way that would help someone who didn't know about the game to understand it better. Well written, and well edited, you really used our workshopping class wonderfully. A

David- I love that you put it into a narrative dialogue, this paper definitely deserves an A. I understand that people need an escape from reality, and that's what this paper brought out. Even thought WoW is not my game of choice, I've played many RPG's which give you a sense of control and freedom. My only concern is paying to play, buying characters? Are you kidding?! There is a line between false sense of esteem and reality of interaction. Games like this can suck people in, but if those people are happy with that quality of life then more power to them. Dialogue didn't seem scripted, kept my attention, and proved a point. Great job.

Thank You guys for the input and feedback!!

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